homework 04.19
학생이 쓴 원문
~ Writing Task:
Please answer the question:
Would you prefer to live in a tropical climate or a temperate climate? Why?
It\'s hard to choose between the two for me.
If I choose, I prefer live in a temperate climate.
The reason why I hesitated to choose tropical climate is because of summer season.
I think I\'ll be unable to survive the summer season in tropical climate.
Because, I also having a hard summer time in my country.
The typically of tropical climate is hot and humid.
So, summer in tropical climate country is more humid than in South Korea.
But when it\'s winter season and I go outside, I want to go the tropical country.
This because the country of tropical climate\'s winter is usually warm.
So many tourists travel to countries with warm and tropical climate like a Philippines, Vietnam, and Guam in the winter season.
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Your ideas and opinions are on point. Keep it up! :)
~ T. Camille
~ Writing Task:
Please answer the question:
Would you prefer to live in a tropical climate or a temperate climate? Why?
It\'s hard to choose between the two for me.
Please answer the question:
Would you prefer to live in a tropical climate or a temperate climate? Why?
It\'s hard to choose between the two for me.
>> CORRECT!
If I choose, I prefer live in a temperate climate.
>> If I choose, I prefer to live in a temperate climate.
The reason why I hesitated to choose tropical climate is because of summer season.
>> CORRECT!
I think I\'ll be unable to survive the summer season in tropical climate.>> I think I\'ll be unable to survive the summer season due to the tropical climate.
Because, I also having a hard summer time in my country.
>> Because, I am also having a hard summer time in my country.
The typically of tropical climate is hot and humid.
>> Typically, a tropical climate is hot and humid.
OR >> A typical tropical climate is hot and humid.
So, summer in tropical climate country is more humid than in South Korea.
>> So, summer in countries with a tropical climate is more humid than in South Korea.
But when it\'s winter season and I go outside, I want to go a tropical country.
>> CORRECT!
This because the country of tropical climate\'s winter is usually warm.>> This is because the tropical countries\' climate\'s winter is usually warm.
So many tourists travel to countries with warm and tropical climate like a Philippines, Vietnam, and Guam in the winter season.
>> So many tourists travel to countries with warm and tropical climate like the Philippines, Vietnam, and Guam in the winter season.
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