homework 04.20
학생이 쓴 원문
~ Writing Task:
Please answer the question:
When do you usually need a hand?
Difficult for me to live alone without the help of others.
It is the same as usual. Every morning I wake up with an my phone alarm, but my parents
keep waking me up for me.
I get a lot of helps from outside, too.
When I buy somethings at store, I get help from the staff.
And when I study English conversation, I get help from my teacher.
Besides that, I get a lot of help.
So, I\'m always grateful to them.
강사 첨삭
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Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Your ideas and opinions are on point. Keep it up! :)
~ T. Camille
~ Writing Task:
Please answer the question:
When do you usually need a hand?
Difficult for me to live alone without the help of others.
Please answer the question:
When do you usually need a hand?
Difficult for me to live alone without the help of others.
>> It\'s difficult for me to live alone without the help of others.
It is the same as usual.
>> CORRECT! Every morning I wake up with an my phone alarm, but my parents
keep waking me up for me.
keep waking me up for me.
>> Every morning I wake up with my phone alarm, but my parents keep waking me up.
I get a lot of helps from outside, too.
>> I get a lot of help from outside, too.
When I buy somethings at store, I get help from the staff.
>> When I buy some things at a store, I get help from the staff.
And when I study English conversation, I get help from my teacher.
>> CORRECT!
Besides that, I get a lot of help.
>> CORRECT!
So, I\'m always grateful to them.
>> CORRECT!
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