homework 04.22
학생이 쓴 원문
~ Writing Task:
Please answer the question:
What is the most unusual superstition you have ever heard about?
There are something special about Korea superstition.
This is because most superstitions contain ghost or scary stories.
I will introduce the ridiculous Korean superstition.
This superstition is that about Deoksugung(Deoksugung Palace).
Deoksugung is now days a popular tourist spot in Seoul, and many people visit it because of there location and mood are good.
But, there is a rumor that if lovers(couple) walk together on the road near palace, it will be soon broken.
The reason why this rumor made was that in the past, there was a court for divorce near the palace.
Want to a divorce couples, they have to walk the near the palace.
So in the past, many couples avoided there for dating course.
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~ T. Camille~ Writing Task:
Please answer the question:
What is the most unusual superstition you have ever heard about?
There are something special about Korea superstition.
Please answer the question:
What is the most unusual superstition you have ever heard about?
There are something special about Korea superstition.
>> There is something special about Korea\'s superstitions.
This is because most superstitions contain ghost or scary stories.
>> CORRECT!
I will introduce the ridiculous Korean superstition.>> CORRECT!
This superstition is that about Deoksugung(Deoksugung Palace).>> This superstition is about the Deoksugung (Deoksugung Palace).
Deoksugung is now days a popular tourist spot in Seoul, and many people visit it because of there location and mood are good.
>> Deoksugung is a popular tourist spot in Seoul nowadays, and many people visit it because of the wonderful location and good mood.
But, there is a rumor that if lovers(couple) walk together on the road near palace, it will be soon broken.
>> CORRECT!
The reason why this rumor made was that in the past, there was a court for divorce near the palace.>> The reason why this rumor was made is that in the past, there was a court for divorce near the palace.
Want to a divorce couples, they have to walk the near the palace.
>> If couples want to divorce, they have to walk near the palace.
So in the past, many couples avoided there for dating course.
>> So in the past, many couples avoided the place when going out on a date.
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