homework 04.26
학생이 쓴 원문
~ Writing Task:
Please answer the question:
In what ways can you help more people?
Three are many ways to help people around them.
In the past, I helped people I didn\'t know well,
Recently, there has been more strange people, So I generally ignore, avoid them.
They are usually suggestion strange religion or con man
If I don\'t ignore them, I listen to their answers, wastes a few hours and even wastes money.
I had experience once, so, I don\'t really help people.
But, I tend to help my friends,family a lot.
If interesting news out on social media, I will share information, get help each other,
and answer questions that I know well.
They celebrate each other\'s big event, anniversary and help each other.
강사 첨삭
Good day, [이름]!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Your ideas and opinions are on point. Keep it up! :)
~ T. Camille
~ Writing Task:
Please answer the question:
In what ways can you help more people?
Three are many ways to help people around them.
Please answer the question:
In what ways can you help more people?
Three are many ways to help people around them.
>> There are many ways to help people around them.
In the past, I helped people I didn\'t know well,
>> In the past, I helped people I didn\'t know well.
Recently, there has been more strange people, So I generally ignore, avoid them.
>> Recently, there has been more strange people, so I generally ignore or avoid them.
They are usually suggestion strange religion or con man
>> They usually make suggestions about some strange religions or con artists.
If I don\'t ignore them, I listen to their answers, wastes a few hours and even wastes money.
>> If I don\'t ignore them, I listen to their answers, waste a few hours, and even waste money.
I had experience once, so, I don\'t really help people.
>> CORRECT!
But, I tend to help my friends,family a lot.
>> But, I tend to help my friends and family a lot.
If interesting news out on social media, I will share information, get help each other,
and answer questions that I know well.
and answer questions that I know well.
>> If it\'s an interesting news out on social media, I will share that information, get help from each other, and answer questions that I know well.
They celebrate each other\'s big event, anniversary and help each other.
They celebrate each other\'s big event, anniversary and help each other.
>> CORRECT!
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