homework 04.27
학생이 쓴 원문
~ Writing Task:
Please answer the question:
Who always asks favors from you?
Who always ask me a favor are always close to me.
They\'re my family. Among them, my parents always ask me a favor.
My father asked me to help with his work on my day off.
MY mother asks for a lot of small favors.
For example, go grocery shopping, put the laundry in the washing machine, clean the house, etc..
I carry out most requests
I think, I also ask my parents a lot of favors.
And my parents carry out most my requests.
So, I am always thank you to my parents.
강사 첨삭
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~ T. Camille
~ Writing Task:
Please answer the question:
Who always asks favors from you?
Who always ask me a favor are always close to me.
Please answer the question:
Who always asks favors from you?
Who always ask me a favor are always close to me.
>> The people who always ask me a favor are always close to me.
They\'re my family.
>> CORRECT! Among them, my parents always ask me a favor.
>> CORRECT!
My father asked me to help with his work on my day off.
>> My father asks me to help him with his work on my day off.
MY mother asks for a lot of small favors.
>> My mother asks for a lot of small favors.
For example, go grocery shopping, put the laundry in the washing machine, clean the house, etc.
>> For example, my mom asks me to go grocery shopping, to put the laundry in the washing machine, to clean the house, etc.
I carry out most requests.
>> CORRECT!
I think, I also ask my parents a lot of favors.
>> CORRECT!
And my parents carry out most my requests.>> And my parents carry out most of my requests.
So, I am always thank you to my parents.
>> So, I am always thankful to my parents.
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