homework 04.28
학생이 쓴 원문
~ Writing Task:
Please answer the question:
Have you ever tried joining in volunteer work?
Yes, I did some volunteer works.
When I was teenagers(middle,high school student), I should did volunteer works at school.
But, back then I didn\'t like spending time on volunteer work, so I didn\'t do well.
After that, I did volunteer works when I was a soldier.
One of them is blood donation. It is draw my blood and give it to need people.
In fact, if I blood donation, I was get a vacation and some gift product.
However, last time I didn\'t do it these days because my body condition became bad after blood donation
Anyway, If I get a chance, I want to do other volunteer work.
강사 첨삭
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~ Writing Task:
Please answer the question:
Have you ever tried joining in volunteer work?
Yes, I did some volunteer works.
Please answer the question:
Have you ever tried joining in volunteer work?
Yes, I did some volunteer works.
>> CORRECT!
When I was teenagers(middle,high school student), I should did volunteer works at school.
>> When I was a teenager ( middle-high school student), I did some volunteer works at school.
But, back then I didn\'t like spending time on volunteer work, so I didn\'t do well.
>> CORRECT!
After that, I did volunteer works when I was a soldier.>> CORRECT!
One of them is blood donation. >> CORRECT!
It is draw my blood and give it to need people.
>> It is a process of drawing blood and giving it to people in need of blood.
In fact, if I blood donation, I was get a vacation and some gift product.
>> In fact, if I do blood donation, I can get a vacation and some gift products.
However, last time I didn\'t do it these days because my body condition became bad after blood donation
>> However, I don\'t do it these days because my body condition became bad after blood donation.
Anyway, If I get a chance, I want to do other volunteer work.
Anyway, If I get a chance, I want to do other volunteer work.
>> CORRECT!
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