homework 04.30

2024-04-30 · 첨삭 강사 Camille

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~ Writing Task: Please answer the question: In your own opinion, why do you think some people make decisions recklessly? We always face moments of choice. Most people will prefer a safe way between a safe way and a dangerous way. But, some people choose a dangerous way. If I make reckless decisions I fails and only I suffers, I think it\'s okay. But, some reckless decisions can make damage others people. And they said it\'s not their mistake and fault, it\'s other people\'s fault. In this case, I think, the person who every moments make reckless decisions and damage others is self-centered mind and individualistic person.

강사 첨삭

Hi, [이름]!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Your ideas and opinions are on point. Keep it up! :)
~ T. Camille


~ Writing Task:
Please answer the question:
In your own opinion, why do you think some people make decisions recklessly?

We always face moments of choice.
>> CORRECT!
Most people will prefer a safe way between a safe way and a dangerous way.
>> Most people will prefer a safe way rather than a dangerous way.
OR >> Most people prefer to play it safe.
But, some people choose a dangerous way.
>> CORRECT!
If I make reckless decisions I fails and only I suffers, I think it\'s okay.
>> If I make reckless decisions then fail and suffer, I think it\'s okay.
But, some reckless decisions can make damage others people.
>> But, some reckless decisions can make damages to other people.
And they said it\'s not their mistake and fault, it\'s other people\'s fault.
>> CORRECT!
In this case, I think, the person who every moments make reckless decisions and damage others is self-centered mind and individualistic person.
>> In this case, I think, the person who makes reckless decisions in every moment and damages others is self-centered and practices individuality.

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