Homework 04

2017-11-22 · 첨삭 강사 Eunice

학생이 쓴 원문

-How do you judge a person? Frankly, I don't deny that appearance is one of critical factors when we judge someone. However, whether what someone says or what someone dose is sincere or not is the most valuable factor when i appraise someone. There are some methods judging someone's attitude. The first thing comes to mind is observing someone's conversational habit in casual occasion. Most people try to be gentle and polite in formal occasion. It is hard to judge someone in the occasion. On the other hand, someone is like to show one's true character in casual situation. There are some cases, such as the way of introducing one's story, making joke, and appraising others. In that situation, if someone's attitude is greatly different with in formal occasion or someone shows rude behavior. We worth to doubt their genuine character. I always try to search sincerity when i first meet someone. After that, I judge someone who treats others sincerely as a reliable, good person.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]!

There are a lot of ways to bring out the true color of a person. No matter how a person tries to show how good they are, there comes a time that their genuine character will be revealed because it\'s their personality and they can not change it anymore. It\'s not that we are seeking for any judgments to other people, but it is more on being true to what you really are. That\'s where our happiness and self-satisfaction lies. What other people say behind your back doesn\'t count after all. Well done [이름]!

See you around!

~Teacher Eunice


-How do you judge a person?

>> Correct!
 Frankly, I don\'t deny that appearance is one of critical factors when we judge someone.
>> Frankly speaking, I can\'t deny the fact that appearance is one of the critical factors when judging someone.
However, whether what someone says or what someone dose is sincere or not is the most valuable factor when i appraise someone.
>> However, whether what someone says or what someone does whether it is sincere or not, I consider it as the most valuable factor when I appraise someone.
There are some methods judging someone\'s attitude.
>> There are some methods when judging someone\'s attitude.
The first thing comes to mind is observing someone\'s conversational habit in casual occasion.
> The first thing that comes in mind is when observing someone\'s conversational habit in casual occasion.
Most people try to be gentle and polite in formal occasion.
>> Most of the people try to be gentle and polite in formal occasion.
It is hard to judge someone in the occasion.
>> It is hard to judge someone in an occasion.
>> It\'s hard to reveal the true color of a person in an occasion.
On the other hand, someone is like to show one\'s true character in casual situation.
>> On the other hand, someone likes to show one\'s true character in casual situation.
There are some cases, such as the way of introducing one\'s story, making joke, and appraising others.
>> There are some ways to determine the true color of a person by introducing one\'s story, making jokes, or appraising others.
In that situation, if someone\'s attitude is greatly different with in formal occasion or someone shows rude behavior.
>> In that situation, if someone\'s attitude is greatly different or shows rude behavior, that\'s the time I can reveal the person\'s real attitude.

We worth to doubt their genuine character.

>> It\'s even worth to doubt their genuine character.

I always try to search sincerity when i first meet someone.

>> I always try to search the sincerity of a person on our first meet.

After that, I judge someone who treats others sincerely as a reliable, good person. 

>> After that, I judge someone who treats others sincerely as a reliable and a good person. 

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