Homework(0415)

2016-04-18 · 첨삭 강사 Rose

학생이 쓴 원문

Do you think it is important to have a sense of humor? I agree that having a sense of humor is very important for us to commuicate with other people. Most of all, if I have a sense of humor, as I meet many people, I can gain in popularity from other people, in particular, women. Also, I can entirely lead the atmosphere of the conversation by having the situation. Moreover, it will help us to get a good job. Recently, many enterprises prefer people who have a sense of humor because those applicants work well after they enter in the company.

강사 첨삭

Thank you for doing your homework, [이름]^^

How about you?

Do you think you have a sense of humor?

Ha! Ha! Ha!

Do you think it is important to have a sense of humor?
>>CORRECT!
I agree that having a sense of humor is very important for us to commuicate with other people.

>>CORRECT!

Most of all, if I have a sense of humor, as I meet many people, I can gain in popularity from other people, in particular, women.

>>Most of all, if I have a sense of humor, as I meet many people, I can gain popularity from other people, in particular, women.

Also, I can entirely lead the atmosphere of the conversation by having the situation.

>>CORRECT!

Moreover, it will help us to get a good job.

>>CORRECT!
Recently, many enterprises prefer people who have a sense of humor because those applicants work well after they enter in the company.

>>CORRECT!

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