homework 05.01
학생이 쓴 원문
~ Writing Task:
Please answer the question:
Can a petrichor give you a calm feeling after it rains?
Smell and humidity are big role in creating the vibe(atmosphere).
The reason why some people use perfume is, because they want to make a good impression to others.
Anyway, I think among the smell that most people like is the smell of petrichor.
This is because, I have never seen anyone around me hates this smell.
If I smell petrichor, I feel like in a place where I\'m walk in humid and fog weather.
And, I think other people also feel the similarly.
So, many place use the petrichor smell the Air freshener and diffuser.
Usually, this smell is use a lot places have a calm vibe, like a bookstores, libraries, and art galleries.
That much, in my opinion, petrichor smell have a power to make people felling calm.
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Hi, [이름]!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Your ideas and opinions are on point. Keep it up! :)
~ T. Camille
~ Writing Task:
Please answer the question:
Can a petrichor give you a calm feeling after it rains?
Smell and humidity are a big role in creating the vibe (atmosphere).
Please answer the question:
Can a petrichor give you a calm feeling after it rains?
Smell and humidity are a big role in creating the vibe (atmosphere).
>> CORRECT!
The reason why some people use perfume is because they want to make a good impression to others.
>> CORRECT!
Anyway, I think among the smell that most people like is the smell of petrichor.>> Anyway, I think among the smells that most people like is the petrichor.
This is because I have never seen anyone around me hates this smell.
>> This is because I have never seen anyone around me who hates this smell.
If I smell petrichor, I feel like in a place where I\'m walk in humid and fog weather.
>> If I smell the petrichor, I feel like I am in a place where I can walk around with a humid and foggy weather.
And, I think other people also feel the similarly.
>> And, I think other people also feel the same.
So, many place use the petrichor smell the Air freshener and diffuser.
>> So, many places use the petrichor\'s smell in air fresheners and diffusers.
Usually, this smell is use a lot places have a calm vibe, like a bookstores, libraries, and art galleries.
>> Usually, this smell is used in a lot of places that have a calm vibe, like bookstores, libraries, and art galleries.
That much, in my opinion, petrichor smell have a power to make people felling calm.
>> That much, in my opinion, the petrichor is a kind of smell that has a power to make people feel calm.
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