homework 05.05
학생이 쓴 원문
~ Writing Task:
Please answer the question:
Do you prefer reading books or watching movies?
I prefer watching movies better than reading books.
The reason is that I give up quickly when I reading a book with no pictures and only writing.
But, If I watch a movie or video, I don\'t have think deeply and
I just have watch and listen to the video.
Anyway, there are pros and cons to each other.
When I watch a movie where the original is a novel (Benjamin Button, Harry Potter.. and the like)
After watch a movie, I read the book of the same title.
Then, I feel more fun because it\'s easy to understand and I also get to know what\'s not in the movie.
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~ T. Camille
~ Writing Task:
Please answer the question:
Do you prefer reading books or watching movies?
I prefer watching movies better than reading books.
Please answer the question:
Do you prefer reading books or watching movies?
I prefer watching movies better than reading books.
>> CORRECT!
The reason is that I give up quickly when I reading a book with no pictures and only writing.
>> The reason is that I give up quickly when I read a book with no pictures and only writing.
But, If I watch a movie or video, I don\'t have think deeply and
I just have watch and listen to the video.
I just have watch and listen to the video.
>> But, if I watch a movie or video, I don\'t have to think deeply and I just have watch and listen to the video.
Anyway, there are pros and cons to each other.
>> CORRECT!
When I watch a movie where the original is a novel (Benjamin Button, Harry Potter.. and the like)>> When I watch a movie where the original is a novel (Benjamin Button, Harry Potter, and the like)
After watch a movie, I read the book of the same title.
>> After watching the movie, I read the book of the same title.
Then, I feel more fun because it\'s easy to understand and I also get to know what\'s not in the movie.
>> Then, I feel it\'s more fun because it\'s easy to understand and I also get to know what\'s not in the movie.
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