homework 05.08
학생이 쓴 원문
~ Writing Task:
Please answer the question:
Would you like to work in the movie industry?
I like to watch movies. But I don\'t have interested in the movie industry.
So, I\'ll write about my friend. My friend name is Han.
Han is loved movies since he was young.
So, I often watch movies with him and talked a lot about movies.
And he said to me, he wanna be a movie director in the future.
Currently, he is majoring in film at university. In addition, he often do part-time job
like a filming movies and filming dramas.
So, I am rooting for Han to achieve his goal.
강사 첨삭
Good day, [이름]!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Your ideas and opinions are on point. Keep it up! :)
~ T. Camille
~ Writing Task:
Please answer the question:
Would you like to work in the movie industry?
I like to watch movies. But I don\'t have interested in the movie industry.
Please answer the question:
Would you like to work in the movie industry?
I like to watch movies. But I don\'t have interested in the movie industry.
>> I like to watch movies, but I don\'t have any interest in the movie industry.
OR >> I love watching movies, but I am not interested in the movie industry.
So, I\'ll write about my friend.
>> CORRECT! My friend name is Han.
>> My friend\'s name is Han.
OR >> His name is Han.
Han is loved movies since he was young.
>> Han loved watching movies since he was young.
So, I often watch movies with him and talked a lot about movies.
>> CORRECT!
And he said to me, he wanna be a movie director in the future.
>> CORRECT!
Currently, he is majoring in film at university.
>> Currently, he is majoring in film at a university.
In addition, he often do part-time job like a filming movies and filming dramas.
>> In addition, he often does a part-time job like filming movies and dramas.
So, I am rooting for Han to achieve his goal.
>> CORRECT!
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