homework 05.12
학생이 쓴 원문
Please answer the question:
Which organization would you like to be active in?
I wish there will be a bicycle club of around my age.
I\'m so into ride a bicycle these days.
So I go to outside to rude a bicycle on weekends and days off.
But I almost ride alone. Because I don\'t have a bicycle friend with me.
My friends doing other sport, but they don\'t has interested ride a bicycles.
Sometimes I go to with my older sister or member of the cycling academy, but them and me is a big age gap.
Even them, some people are older than my parents.
The smallest age gap between them and me is 15 years old.
Of course, ride a bicycles withe them also fun.
But, I can\'t overcome the age gap.
So, I want there will be a bicycle club of around my age.
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Please answer the question:
Which organization would you like to be active in?
I wish there will be a bicycle club of around my age.
Which organization would you like to be active in?
I wish there will be a bicycle club of around my age.
>> I wish there will be a bicycle club for people around my age.
I\'m so into ride a bicycle these days.
>> I\'m so into riding a bicycle these days.
OR >> I am really into riding a bicycle these days.
So I go to outside to rude a bicycle on weekends and days off.
>> So I go outside to ride a bicycle on weekends and on my days off.
But I almost ride alone. Because I don\'t have a bicycle friend with me.
>> But I almost ride alone, because I don\'t have a bicycle friend with me.
My friends doing other sport, but they don\'t has interested ride a bicycles.
>> My friends do other sports, but they don\'t has interested ride a bicycles.
Sometimes I go to with my older sister or member of the cycling academy, but them and me is a big age gap.
>> Sometimes I go to with my older sister or other members of the cycling academy, but we have a big age gap.
Even them, some people are older than my parents.
>> CORRECT!
The smallest age gap between them and me is 15 years old.
>> The smallest age gap between me and them is 15 years.
Of course, ride a bicycles withe them also fun.
>> Of course, riding a bicycle with them also fun.
But, I can\'t overcome the age gap.
>> CORRECT!
So, I want there will be a bicycle club of around my age.>> So, I hope there will be a bicycle club of around my age.
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