homework 05-16

2023-05-16 · 첨삭 강사 Camille

학생이 쓴 원문

~ Writing Task: Please answer the question: How much help can you provide for your loved ones? I can help for I loved the people. As much as I can. The people is in my family,friends, and social friends. I am not a stable position yet. Because I am a student now and receiving help from my parents. So, There are not much I can do for other yet. Later, my ability is at a level where I can help and then I will help a lot of people. Like my parents do to me. So, my priority is to increase my ability and make it up to my around people.

강사 첨삭

Good day, [이름]!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Your ideas and opinions are on point. Keep it up! :)
~ T. Camille

~ Writing Task:
Please answer the question:
How much help can you provide for your loved ones?

I can help for I loved the people. As much as I can.

>> I help the people I love as much as I can.

The people is in my family,friends, and social friends.

>> Those people are my family, friends, and acquaintances.

I am not a stable position yet.

>> I am not in a stable position yet.

Because I am a student now and receiving help from my parents.

>> Because I am still a student, I receive help from my parents.

So, There are not much I can do for other yet.

>> So, I can\'t do much for others yet.

Later, my ability is at a level where I can help and then I will help a lot of people.

>> CORRECT!

Like my parents do to me.

>> That\'s what my parents do to me.

So, my priority is to increase my ability and make it up to my around people.

>> So, my priority is to increase my ability and make it up to the people around me.

파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.

다른 영어첨삭교정 보기