homework 05.17
학생이 쓴 원문
~ Writing Task:
Please answer the question:
What are the main reasons of road accidents.
I think the main reasons of road accidents is traffic signal violation.
Many Koreans already know well, we can\'t wait a few seconds or minutes.
So, sometimes when we crossing the traffic light, run a red light or speeds up the car quickly and down the road.
Most problem is when a person and car accidents.
If, a person and a car crush, pedestrians will be hurt more seriously.
But, even if a pedestrian run a red light, the car driver will be punished.
I don\'t understand about this situation, anyway we should to keep the signal and drive carefully.
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Your ideas and opinions are on point. Keep it up! :)
~ T. Camille
~ Writing Task:
Please answer the question:
What are the main reasons of road accidents?
I think the main reason of road accidents is traffic signal violation.
Please answer the question:
What are the main reasons of road accidents?
I think the main reason of road accidents is traffic signal violation.
>> CORRECT!
Many Koreans already know well, we can\'t wait a few seconds or minutes.
>> CORRECT!
So, sometimes when we crossing the traffic light, run a red light or speeds up the car quickly and down the road.
So, sometimes when we crossing the traffic light, run a red light or speeds up the car quickly and down the road.
>> So, sometimes when we cross the traffic light, we run a red light or speed up the car quickly down the road.
Most problem is when a person and car accidents.
>> The topmost problem is when a person meets a car accident.
If a person and a car crush, pedestrians will be hurt more seriously.
>> If a person and a car crash, pedestrians will be hurt more seriously.
OR >> If a person and a car collide, pedestrians will be hurt more seriously.
But, even if a pedestrian run a red light, the car driver will be punished.
>> But, even if a pedestrian runs a red light, the driver will be punished.
I don\'t understand about this situation, anyway we should to keep the signal and drive carefully.
>> I don\'t understand this situation, anyway we should understand the signals and drive carefully.
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