homework 05.19
학생이 쓴 원문
~ Writing Task:
Please answer the question:
Which among your things do you like best?
My favorite things keep changing as time goes by.
Certainly, I dislike studying at school.
Since I was a high school student, I liked to collect rare shoes and clothes.
Because, the items are no common and the cool design, so I felt attractive.
When I get rare clothes, shoes, I often made a profit by reselling them.
But, these days I felt this hobby is not funny and meaningless so, I reduce the collect rare clothes.
Recently, I like cycling and traveling.
Among the trip, I meet and talk to many people, I understand many things like a their culture,
lifestyle, food, trend, etc.
I think someday I will change my favorite things again.
But, I don\'t have regrets about the I liked.
강사 첨삭
Good day, [이름]!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Your ideas and opinions are on point. Keep it up! :)
~ T. Camille
~ Writing Task:
Please answer the question:
Which among your things do you like best?
My favorite things keep changing as time goes by.
Please answer the question:
Which among your things do you like best?
My favorite things keep changing as time goes by.
>> CORRECT!
Certainly, I dislike studying at school.
>> CORRECT!
Since I was a high school student, I liked to collect rare shoes and clothes.
>> Since I was a high school student, I liked collecting rare shoes and clothes.
Because, the items are no common and the cool design, so I felt attractive.
>> Because the items are not common and the designs are cool, I felt that these are attractive.
When I get rare clothes, shoes, I often made a profit by reselling them.
>> When I get rare clothes and shoes, I often make a profit by reselling them.
But, these days I felt this hobby is not funny and meaningless so, I reduce the collect rare clothes.
>> But, these days, I felt like this hobby is not fun and meaningless so I minimized collecting rare clothes.
Recently, I like cycling and traveling.
>> CORRECT!
Among the trip, I meet and talk to many people, I understand many things like a their culture, lifestyle, food, trend, etc.>> CORRECT!
I think someday I will change my favorite things again.>> CORRECT!
But, I don\'t have regrets about the I liked.>> But, I don\'t have regrets about the things I liked.
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