homework 05.22
학생이 쓴 원문
~ Writing Task:
Please answer the question:
Why do you always get what you want?
I have a personality that I must have what I want.
Sometimes I buy trending items and things I need if I want.
But, these days I think about things and buy things.
If I buy things without thinking, it is a overspending after that my money run out.
In the past I regretted it. Because I bought to much unnecessary things.
But, sometimes I can\'t have everything I want.
I give up easily if the item I want is ridiculously expensive.
And, Honor is not get easy. Efforts is a unafforbable value.
강사 첨삭
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Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Your ideas and opinions are on point. Keep it up! :)
~ T. Camille
~ Writing Task:
Please answer the question:
Why do you always get what you want?
I have a personality that I must have what I want.
Please answer the question:
Why do you always get what you want?
I have a personality that I must have what I want.
>> CORRECT!
Sometimes I buy trending items and things I need if I want.
>> CORRECT!
But, these days I think about things and buy things.
>> But, these days I think about things and buy things that are necessary.
If I buy things without thinking, it is a overspending after that my money run out.
>> If I buy things without thinking, it is a form of overspending, and after that my money runs out.
In the past I regretted it. Because I bought to much unnecessary things.
>> In the past I regretted it, because I bought to much unnecessary things.
But, sometimes I can\'t have everything I want.
>> CORRECT!
I give up easily if the item I want is ridiculously expensive.>> CORRECT!
And, Honor is not get easy. >> And, Honor is not easy to get.
Efforts is a unafforbable value.
>> Effort is an unaffordable value.
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