homework 05.23
학생이 쓴 원문
~ Writing Task:
Please answer the question:
Who always notices first when you make a mistake?
The mistakes always live with me like a best friend.
No matter how much I think about it, I have small mistakes more than other people.
Thanks to this, I learned how to solve mistake by myself form small mistakes.
But, big problem is the big mistakes.
Without intention I make regularly big issues.
Sometimes I think like someone is giving me a quest.
Anyway, if because of my mistake, I will try to overcome it myself.
If I can\'t solve myself, I ask people around me(friends, parents, sometimes ask to stranger).
Fortunately, somebody else has no been harmed by my mistake.
I am thanks to the around people for helping me.
강사 첨삭
Good day, [이름]!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Your ideas and opinions are on point. Keep it up! :)
~ T. Camille
~ Writing Task:
Please answer the question:
Who always notices first when you make a mistake?
The mistakes always live with me like a best friend.
Please answer the question:
Who always notices first when you make a mistake?
The mistakes always live with me like a best friend.
>> CORRECT!
No matter how much I think about it, I have small mistakes more than other people.
>> CORRECT!
Thanks to this, I learned how to solve mistake by myself form small mistakes.
>> Thanks to this, I learned how to solve small mistakes by myself.
But, big problem is the big mistakes.
>> But, big problems arise from big mistakes.
Without intention I make regularly big issues.
>> Without intention, I make big issues regularly.
Sometimes I think like someone is giving me a quest.
Anyway, if because of my mistake, I will try to overcome it myself.
Anyway, if because of my mistake, I will try to overcome it myself.
>> CORRECT!
If I can\'t solve myself, I ask people around me(friends, parents, sometimes ask to stranger).>> If I can\'t solve it myself, I ask people around me (friends, parents, or sometimes ask strangers\' help).
Fortunately, somebody else has no been harmed by my mistake.
>> Fortunately, other people haven\'t been harmed because of my mistake.
I am thanks to the around people for helping me.
>> I am thankful to the people around for helping me.
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