Homework {05/24}
학생이 쓴 원문
Theme: Make a sentence using the words below.
1. I will withdraw money because I have to go to the market.
2. I need cash when I buy some fruits at the market.
3. I have my bank account In my room.
4. My dad gave me an ATM card to me.
5. I have to use ATM machine when I need to withdraw money.
강사 첨삭
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Theme: Make a sentence using the words below.
1. I will withdraw money because I have to go to the market.
>> CORRECT~~
2. I need cash when I buy some fruits at the market.
>> CORRECT~~
3. I have my bank account In my room.
>> I have my bank card in my room.
>> or: I have a bank account in Korea Development Bank.
4. My dad gave me an ATM card to me.
>> My dad gave me an ATM card.
>> or: My dad gave an ATM card to me.
5. I have to use ATM machine when I need to withdraw money.
>> I have to use the ATM machine when I need to withdraw money.
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