homework 05.24

2023-05-25 · 첨삭 강사 Camille

학생이 쓴 원문

~ Writing Task: Please answer the question: What do you do after learning that you did something wrong? If I heard that I made a mistake, I admit it first. I admit and apologize to them. Fast admit is reduce the time to deal of accidents and it is a important of trust in society. I think it\'s better to stay away from people who don\'t admit mistake and try to escape themselves. There is a Korean saying that it is better to get beaten first. It\'s similar mean you had better face your difficulties as early as possible.

강사 첨삭

Good day, [이름]!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Your ideas and opinions are on point. Keep it up! :)
~ T. Camille

~ Writing Task:
Please answer the question:
What do you do after learning that you did something wrong?

If I heard that I made a mistake, I admit it first.

>> If I hear that I made a mistake, I admit it first.

I admit and apologize to them.

>> CORRECT!

Fast admit is reduce the time to deal of accidents and it is a important of trust in society.

>> Admitting mistakes right away reduces the time to deal with accidents, and it is important in building trust in the society.

I think it\'s better to stay away from people who don\'t admit mistake and try to escape themselves.

>> I think it\'s better to stay away from people who don\'t admit mistakes and try to escape from it.

There is a Korean saying that it is better to get beaten first.

>> CORRECT!

It\'s similar mean you had better face your difficulties as early as possible.

>> It\'s similar to the saying, \"you better face your difficulties as early as possible\".

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