homework 05.25
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~ Writing Task:
Please answer the question:
What are the punishments for \"overspeeding\"?
When I dive on the expressway(Highway), I can find many other cars over speeding.
However, most cars have navigation systems it tell the driver where the speed traps(camera, bump sensor) .
As a solution, theses days the police use an undercover car to crack down.
This car have a good engine performance better than other police car.
So, it\'s fast catch up and crack down most vehicles.
Anyway, there are two kinds of punishments for overspeeding.
It is caught by the speed trap or directly by the police.
If catch by trap, fine will be give by home mail. There is no minus points.
But, if catch direct by the police, they will be give minus points and fines.
Slight overspeeding is low fine, but severe overspeeding is a big fine and big penalty.
If the minus points stack up more than 40 points a year, driver\'s license will be stop as much as
1point is 1 day.
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~ Writing Task:
Please answer the question:
What are the punishments for \"over speeding\"?
When I dive on the expressway(Highway), I can find many other cars over speeding.
Please answer the question:
What are the punishments for \"over speeding\"?
When I dive on the expressway(Highway), I can find many other cars over speeding.
>> When I drive on the expressway (highway), I can find many other cars over speeding.
However, most cars have navigation systems it tell the driver where the speed traps(camera, bump sensor).
>> However, most cars have navigation systems, and it tells the driver where the speed traps (camera, bump sensor) are.
As a solution, theses days the police use an undercover car to crack down.
>> As a solution, these days the police use an undercover car to track down people who are over speeding.
This car have a good engine performance better than other police car.
>> This car has a good engine performance better than other police cars.
So, it\'s fast catch up and crack down most vehicles.
>> So, it\'s fast to catch up and track down most vehicles.
Anyway, there are two kinds of punishments for over speeding.
>> CORRECT!
It is caught by the speed trap or directly by the police.
>> CORRECT!
If catch by trap, fine will be give by home mail. There is no minus points.
>> If caught by trap, fine will be give by home mail. There is no minus points.
But, if catch direct by the police, they will be give minus points and fines.
>> But, if caught directly by the police, they will be give minus points and fines.
Slight over speeding is low fine, but severe over speeding is a big fine and big penalty.
>> Slight over speeding is given a low fine, but severe over speeding is a big fine and given a big penalty.
If the minus points stack up more than 40 points a year, driver\'s license will be stop as much as 1point is 1 day.
>> If the minus points stack up more than 40 points a year, the driver\'s license will be stopped as much as 1 point a day.
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