homework 06.01
학생이 쓴 원문
~ Writing Task:
Please answer the question:
Have you ever dreamt about something that later came true?
I always think positively. I don\'t think anything can be achieved if I have negative thoughts.
One of my favorite sentence is, \"Have a big dream, even if breaks, the piece will be big.\"
Realistically, I think some of achieve even if I have difficult dreams or fail.
I have not achieve my big dream yet. Besides, I am not yet set a my big dream.
So, these days, I set for big dream, I meet new people, talk about various topics, travel, and stack experience.
I believe these things will be achieve for my dreams later.
강사 첨삭
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~ T. Camille
~ Writing Task:
Please answer the question:
Have you ever dreamt about something that later came true?
I always think positively.
>> CORRECT! Please answer the question:
Have you ever dreamt about something that later came true?
I always think positively.
I don\'t think anything can be achieved if I have negative thoughts.
>> CORRECT!
One of my favorite sentence is, \"Have a big dream, even if breaks, the piece will be big.\"
>> One of my favorite sentence is, \"Have a big dream, even if it breaks, the piece will be big.\"
Realistically, I think some of achieve even if I have difficult dreams or fail.
>> Realistically, I think some of them could be achieved even if I have dreams that are difficult to achieve or failures.
I have not achieve my big dream yet.
>> I have not achieved my biggest dream yet.
Besides, I am not yet set a my big dream.
>> Besides, I haven\'t set my biggest dream yet.
So, these days, I set for big dream, I meet new people, talk about various topics, travel, and stack experience.
So, these days, I set for big dream, I meet new people, talk about various topics, travel, and stack experience.
>> So, these days, I set for big dreams, meet new people, talk about various topics, travel, and stack experience.
I believe these things will be achieve for my dreams later.
I believe these things will be achieve for my dreams later.
>> I believe these things will be achieved later on.
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