homework 06.06
학생이 쓴 원문
~ Writing Task:
Please answer the question:
Do you believe in superstitions?
I\'m not a big believe in superstitions, but I\'m interested in related stories.
But when I meet people who believe in superstitions too strongly, I feel tired.
One of the superstitions in Korea is that you will die if you sleep with a fan on
with close the window and door.
Now most people don\'t believe it, but a few years ago my parents believed in this superstition.
These days, MBTI test are popular in Korea like a superstitions.
(MBTI is It stands for Myers-Briggs Type Indicator.)
MBTI is show your personality type with 4 or 5 alphabets.
It has become a routine to ask new people or friends, say to \" What\'s your MBTI?\"
But it\'s not scientific either, and it talks for fun.
강사 첨삭
Good day, [이름]!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Your ideas and opinions are on point. Keep it up! :)
~ T. Camille
~ Writing Task:
Please answer the question:
Do you believe in superstitions?
I\'m not a big believe in superstitions, but I\'m interested in related stories.
Please answer the question:
Do you believe in superstitions?
I\'m not a big believe in superstitions, but I\'m interested in related stories.
>> I\'m not a big believer of superstitions, but I\'m interested in related stories.
OR >> I don\'t believe in superstitions, but I\'m interested in related stories.
But when I meet people who believe in superstitions too strongly, I feel tired.
>> CORRECT!
One of the superstitions in Korea is that you will die if you sleep with a fan on
with close the window and door.
with close the window and door.
>> One of the superstitions in Korea is that you will die if you sleep with a fan on with closed windows and doors.
Now most people don\'t believe it, but a few years ago my parents believed in this superstition.
Now most people don\'t believe it, but a few years ago my parents believed in this superstition.
>> CORRECT!
These days, MBTI test are popular in Korea like a superstitions.(MBTI is It stands for Myers-Briggs Type Indicator.)
>> These days, MBTI test is popular in Korea like superstitions (MBTI is It stands for Myers-Briggs Type Indicator).
MBTI is show your personality type with 4 or 5 alphabets.
MBTI is show your personality type with 4 or 5 alphabets.
>> MBTI shows your personality type with 4 or 5 alphabets.
It has become a routine to ask new people or friends, say to \" What\'s your MBTI?\"
It has become a routine to ask new people or friends, say to \" What\'s your MBTI?\"
>> CORRECT!
But it\'s not scientific either, and it talks for fun.>> But it\'s not scientific either, and it is a topic for fun.
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