homework 06.09
학생이 쓴 원문
~ Writing Task:
Please answer the question:
What\'s the one house chore you really hate? How often do you do it?
The chore I find most troublesome at house is washing dishes.
Because after eating I\'m full and lazy to move.
So, these days I use a disposable dish once and throw away or minimize the bowl and eat food.
The next thing that bothersome is organizing my closet.
After washing clothes at home, I should to organizing my clothes.
But, my closet is small, so I have to take care of well organizing.
So, it\'s a bothersome to doing often.
But I clean up at least once a week.
If we don\'t have a machine(washing machine, vacuum cleaner) , maybe I have run away.
House chore without machine is make me exhausting.
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~ Writing Task:
Please answer the question:
What\'s the one house chore you really hate? How often do you do it?
The chore I find most troublesome at house is washing dishes.
Please answer the question:
What\'s the one house chore you really hate? How often do you do it?
The chore I find most troublesome at house is washing dishes.
>> The chore I find most troublesome at home is washing dishes.
Because after eating I\'m full and lazy to move.
>> That\'s because after eating I\'m full and lazy to move.
So, these days I use a disposable dish once and throw away or minimize the bowl and eat food.
>> So, these days I use a disposable plate and throw it away or minimize the usage of bowls when I eat food.
The next thing that bothersome is organizing my closet.
>> The next thing that bothers me is organizing my closet.
After washing clothes at home, I should to organizing my clothes.
>> After washing clothes at home, I should organize my clothes.
But, my closet is small, so I have to take care of well organizing.
>> But, my closet is small, so I have to organize it well.
So, it\'s a bothersome to doing often.
>> So, it\'s bothersome to do it often.
But I clean up at least once a week.
>> CORRECT!
If we don\'t have a machine(washing machine, vacuum cleaner) , maybe I have run away.
>> If we don\'t have a machine (washing machine, vacuum cleaner), maybe I have to run away.
House chore without machine is make me exhausting.
>> House chores without machines make me exhausted.
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