homework 06.21
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~ Writing Task:
Please answer the question:
What could be some reasons why people love collecting certain items?
Collecting is that people like is a kind of hobby.
Collecting things can be a cheap or expensive item.
Just, anything I like collecting items.
It\'s simply funny and make memories about collecting items.
Almost, my around people have a hobby of collecting.
As an example, my uncle have a collecting teacups and dish.
The one room is its showroom in the his house.
And my mother have a collecting various plants.
But, her\'s pot(plant) is too many.
So, I often I can\'t find her\'s pot, and kick it barefoot, and I feel pain.
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Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Your ideas and opinions are on point. Keep it up! :)
~ T. Camille
~ Writing Task:
Please answer the question:
What could be some reasons why people love collecting certain items?
Collecting is that people like is a kind of hobby.
Please answer the question:
What could be some reasons why people love collecting certain items?
Collecting is that people like is a kind of hobby.
>> Collecting items that people like is a kind of hobby.
Collecting things can be a cheap or expensive item.
>> Collecting things can either be cheap or expensive.
Just, anything I like collecting items.
>> I just like collecting items.
It\'s simply funny and make memories about collecting items.
>> It\'s simply funny to make memories about collecting items.
Almost, my around people have a hobby of collecting.
>> Most people around me have a hobby of collecting items.
As an example, my uncle have a collecting teacups and dish.
>> As an example, my uncle has a collection of teacups and other kitchen wares.
The one room is its showroom in the his house.
>> One room in his house is a showroom.
OR >> He has a showroom in his house.
And my mother have a collecting various plants.
>> On the other hand, my mother has a collection of various plants.
But, her\'s pot(plant) is too many.
>> But the flower pots are too many.
So, I often I can\'t find her\'s pot, and kick it barefoot, and I feel pain.
>> So, I often I can\'t find her pot; I kicked it barefoot, and I felt pain.
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