Homework {07/05}
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Theme: [ESSAY] In what ways does the weather influence our daily lives?
Sunny weathers influence our lives exciting and happy.
Rainy weathers influence our lives weary and sad.
Monsoon seasons influence our lives humid and angry.
Cloudy weathers influence our lives tired and angry.
Many weathers influences our daily lives!
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Theme: [ESSAY] In what ways does the weather influence our daily lives?
Sunny weathers influence our lives exciting and happy.
>> Sunny weather influences our lives to become exciting and happy.
>> OR: Sunny weather influences us to become exciting and happy.
Rainy weathers influence our lives weary and sad.
>> Rainy weather influences our lives to be weary and sad.
>> OR: Rainy weather influences us to be weary and sad.
Monsoon seasons influence our lives humid and angry.
>> Monsoon seasons influence our lives to feel humid and angry.
>> OR: Monsoon seasons influence us to suffer from humidity and angry.
Cloudy weathers influence our lives tired and angry.
>> Cloudy weather influences our lives to be tired and irritated.
>> OR: Cloudy weather influences us to be tired and irritated.
Many weathers influences our daily lives!
>> Different kinds of weather influence our daily lives in so many ways.
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