homework 07.05

2023-07-06 · 첨삭 강사 Camille

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~ Writing Task: Please answer the question: Do you always try and look at or read the weather forecast? Yes, always I check the weather forecast. Because, my condition that day changes able to on the weather. Among the weather, I most hate rainy days. The reason why, when a rainy day I have to take a some items. I usually go outside take a umbrella, shoes, and clothes in my bag. If my body get wet by rain and I go indoors, I feel uncomfortable in a wet state. And public transportation is more crowded in the rainy day. So, I will should leave earlier than another days. But, these days weather forecast is showing a misinformation. For example, the weather forecast app said it will be start rain, but it was not. So, these days, I don\'t well trust weather forecast.

강사 첨삭

Good day, [이름]!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Your ideas and opinions are on point. Keep it up! :)
~ T. Camille

~ Writing Task:
Please answer the question:
Do you always try and look at or read the weather forecast?

Yes, always I check the weather forecast.

>> CORRECT!

Because, my condition that day changes able to on the weather.

>> That\'s because my condition changes depending on the weather.

Among the weather, I most hate rainy days.

>> Among the weather, I hate rainy days the most.

The reason why, when a rainy day I have to take a some items.

>> The reason why I hate it is because when it rains, I have to take some items.

I usually go outside take a umbrella, shoes, and clothes in my bag.

>> I usually go outside take an umbrella, shoes, and clothes in my bag.

If my body get wet by rain and I go indoors, I feel uncomfortable in a wet state.

>> If my body gets wet by rain and I go indoors, I feel uncomfortable in a wet state.

And public transportation is more crowded in the rainy day.

>> And public transportations are more crowded on rainy days.

So, I will should leave earlier than another days.

>> So, I should leave earlier than other days.

But, these days weather forecast is showing a misinformation.

>> But, these days, weather forecasts bring misinformation.

For example, the weather forecast app said it will be start rain, but it was not.

>> For example, the weather forecast app said it will start raining, but it doesn\'t.

So, these days, I don\'t well trust weather forecast.

>> So, these days, I don\'t trust weather forecasts well.

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