Homework {07/09}
학생이 쓴 원문
Theme: Note/Remember the words below.
1. I\'m tremendous happy and my mom is so happy too.
2. I have learned mat yoga, but I haven\'t learned flying yoga.
3. I love to seeing pole dancing. However, I don\'t want to learn pole dancing.
4. Before, piano is an unusual instrument but now, almost all people learn piano.
5. Your last experiment wan excellent, but you can try it using this or that.
강사 첨삭
Here\'s your edited homework, [이름]!
Thanks for sending it! Have a safe and happy weekend!
Cheers,
Jean~~
Theme: Note/Remember the words below.
1. I\'m tremendous happy and my mom is so happy too.
>> I\'m tremendously happy and my mom is very delighted as well.
2. I have learned mat yoga, but I haven\'t learned flying yoga.
>> I have learned mat yoga, but I haven\'t learned flying yoga.
3. I love to seeing pole dancing. However, I don\'t want to learn pole dancing.
>> I love watching pole dancing. However, I don\'t want to learn it.
4. Before, piano is an unusual instrument but now, almost all people learn piano.
>> Before, the piano was an unusual instrument but now, almost all people learn the piano.
5. Your last experiment wan excellent, but you can try it using this or that.
>> Your last experiment was excellent, but you can try it using this or that. (I think it was only a typo, but the word \'was\' was written \'wan\'.)
>> or: Your last experiment was excellent, but you could have tried it using such and such material.
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