homework 07.11

2023-07-12 · 첨삭 강사 Camille

학생이 쓴 원문

~ Writing Task: Please answer the question: How does the weather change your feelings? The weather affects my fellings and body condition. On the sunny days, I wake up earlier than other day, and my body condition is good. So, I don\'t get tired easily. On the other hand, rainy days or snowy days I get tired quickly even I don\'t do anything. The winter season snowy days is not bad more than summer season. Because, winter season is dry weather. But, summer is very humid and discomfort index is high. That\'s why I dislike what to do in the rainy day. Unfortunately, the weather forecast said tomorrow Korea weather is will be rainy day. In addition, I will have to go my father\'s company in the early morning. Tomorrow will be quickly tired day. :(

강사 첨삭

Good day, [이름]!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Your ideas and opinions are on point. Keep it up! :)
~ T. Camille

~ Writing Task:
Please answer the question:
How does the weather change your feelings?

The weather affects my fellings and body condition.
>> The weather affects my feelings and body condition.
On the sunny days, I wake up earlier than other day, and my body condition is good.
>> On the sunny days, I wake up earlier than other days, and my body condition is good.
So, I don\'t get tired easily.
>> CORRECT!
On the other hand, rainy days or snowy days I get tired quickly even I don\'t do anything.
>> On the other hand, when it\'s rainy or snowy, I get tired quickly even if I don\'t do anything.
The winter season snowy days is not bad more than summer season.
>> Snowy days during the winter season is not bad more than the summer season.
Because, winter season is dry weather.
>> That\'s because the winter season has a dry weather.
But, summer is very humid and discomfort index is high.
>> CORRECT!
That\'s why I dislike what to do in the rainy day.
>> That\'s why I dislike doing something on rainy days.
Unfortunately, the weather forecast said tomorrow Korea weather is will be rainy day.
>> Unfortunately, the weather forecast said that it will be rainy tomorrow.
In addition, I will have to go my father\'s company in the early morning.
>> In addition, I have to go to my father\'s company in the early morning.
Tomorrow will be quickly tired day. :(
>> I think I will easily get tired tomorrow. :(

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