homework 07.13

2023-07-13 · 첨삭 강사 Camille

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~ Writing Task: Please answer the question: What exotic food would you like to try? I like most foods, and eat well them(most food). I think I don\'t have allergy of food, it\'s lucky. So, I can try various food without worry. But, there are many foods I don\'t tried yet. The reason is I have a lot of fear of food. Among the exotic food, I want try lamb. I have never tried lamb. Because, I heard lamb is has a unique smells. So, If you sensitive to smell, it\'s difficult to try. I also to sensitive to smell, so I have worries before I eat food. But, I\'ll overcome it and I\'ll try new foods.

강사 첨삭

Good day, [이름]!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Your ideas and opinions are on point. Keep it up! :)
~ T. Camille

~ Writing Task:
Please answer the question:
What exotic food would you like to try?

I like most foods, and eat well them(most food).

>> I like most foods, and eat them well (most food).

I think I don\'t have allergy of food, it\'s lucky.

>> I think I don\'t have any food allergies, so I\'m lucky.

So, I can try various food without worry.

>> CORRECT!
But, there are many foods I don\'t tried yet.

>> But, there are many kinds of food I haven\'t tried yet.

The reason is I have a lot of fear of food.

>> The reason is I have a lot of fear of trying different kinds of food.

Among the exotic food, I want try lamb.

>> Among the exotic food, I want to try eating lamb meat.

I have never tried lamb.

>> I have never tried eating lamb meat before.

Because, I heard lamb is has a unique smells.

>> Because, I heard lamb meat has a unique smell.

So, If you sensitive to smell, it\'s difficult to try.

>> So, if you are sensitive to the smell, it\'s difficult to try.

I also to sensitive to smell, so I have worries before I eat food.

>> I am also sensitive to the smell, so I have worries about eating food before.

But, I\'ll overcome it and I\'ll try new foods.

>> But, I\'ll overcome it and I\'ll try various kinds of food.

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