Homework {07/26}

2021-07-27 · 첨삭 강사 Jean

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Theme: Make a sentence using the words below. 1. There was a freestyle event and I saw it with Annie. 2. Have a restful vacation and also have a nice weekend! 3. She is muscular, but her height is 150cm. 4. I bought a recliner chair. However it was so expensive. 5. It can\'t be a fruit-bearing tree or flower tree.

강사 첨삭


Here\'s your corrected homework, [이름]. Thanks for promptly sending it. 
Catch you at our next session!

Cheers,
Jean~~

                     
                              Theme: Make a sentence using the words below.


1. There was a freestyle event and I saw it with Annie.
>> CORRECT~~

2. Have a restful vacation and also have a nice weekend!
>>  Have a restful vacation and also a nice weekend!
>> OR:  Have a relaxing vacation and also a pleasant weekend!

3. She is muscular, but her height is 150cm.
>>  OR: She has a muscular body, but she is only 150cm tall. 

4. I bought a recliner chair. However it was so expensive.
>> OR: I purchased a sunbathing lounge chair. However, it was very costly. 

5. It can\'t be a fruit-bearing tree or flower tree.
>> It can\'t be a fruit-bearing tree or flowering tree.

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