homework 07.28
학생이 쓴 원문
Writing Task:
Please answer the question:
Children can be scared of many things, real or imagined.
Were you frightened by anything as a child?
I have a lot of fear since I was young.
Actually, it\'s not biggie to on the past now.
Nevertheless, one of the reason why I had scared, because of the conscious of other around me.
In my opinion, most Koreans are self-conscious from around people.
If my behavior is different from other people, they are understand about me as an unusual person.
For example, when I was student if I ask a question to my teacher during class
other student or teacher around me didn\'t like it that.
Because, they are scolded for delay class time or delay the break time of friends around them.
So, I was afraid and stressed of this environment.
These days, I feel more comfortable because I live my own way.
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Writing Task:
Please answer the question:
Children can be scared of many things, real or imagined.
Were you frightened by anything as a child?
I have a lot of fear since I was young.
Please answer the question:
Children can be scared of many things, real or imagined.
Were you frightened by anything as a child?
I have a lot of fear since I was young.
>> I have a lot of fears since I was young.
Actually, it\'s not biggie to on the past now.
>> Actually, it\'s not a biggie because it\'s all in the past now.
Nevertheless, one of the reason why I had scared, because of the conscious of other around me.
>> Nevertheless, one of the reasons why I had fears is because I feel conscious about the other people around me.
In my opinion, most Koreans are self-conscious from around people.
In my opinion, most Koreans are self-conscious from around people.
>> In my opinion, most Koreans are self-conscious about people around them.
If my behavior is different from other people, they are understand about me as an unusual person.
>> If my behavior is different from other people, they see me as an unusual person.
OR >> If my behavior is different from other people, they think of me as an unusual person.
For example, when I was student if I ask a question to my teacher during class
other student or teacher around me didn\'t like it that.
For example, when I was student if I ask a question to my teacher during class
other student or teacher around me didn\'t like it that.
>> For example, when I was student, if I ask a question to my teacher during class, other students or teachers around me didn\'t like that.
Because, they are scolded for delay class time or delay the break time of friends around them.
Because, they are scolded for delay class time or delay the break time of friends around them.
>> That\'s because they are scolded for the delayed class time or the delayed break time of friends around them.
So, I was afraid and stressed of this environment.
>> CORRECT!
These days, I feel more comfortable because I live my own way.
These days, I feel more comfortable because I live my own way.
>> CORRECT!
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