Homework {07/29}
학생이 쓴 원문
Theme: Make a sentence using the words below!
1. hairstylist / and
2. cathedral / but
3. rapidly / also
4. cinema / at
5. viewers / although
6. workout / at
1. My friend Anna want to be a hairstylist and doctor.
2. My grandmother goes to cathedral but my dad don\'t go to cathedral
3. My mom is rapidly and also she is strong.
4. I want to go at cinema when Covid is out.
5. viewers said \"It was bad movie.\" although the movie is fun.
6. I think walking at stairs are workout thing.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
Thanks for sending your homework. Enjoy the rest of your evening. See you on Friday!
Cheers,
Jean
1. My friend Anna want to be a hairstylist and doctor.
>> My friend Anna wants to be a hairstylist and a doctor.
2. My grandmother goes to cathedral but my dad don\'t go to cathedral
>> My grandmother goes to the cathedral but my dad doesn\'t.
3. My mom is rapidly and also she is strong.
>> My mom is fast and strong.
>> Example: My mom works rapidly.
>> Example: [이름] reads rapidly.
4. I want to go at cinema when Covid is out.
>> I want to go to the cinema when the COVID pandemic ends.
5. viewers said \"It was bad movie.\" although the movie is fun.
>> The viewers said that the movie was bad although it was fun.
6. I think walking at stairs are workout thing.
>> I think walking up or down the stairs is a kind of workout.
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