Homework {08/03}

2020-08-03 · 첨삭 강사 Jean

학생이 쓴 원문

Theme: Make a sentence using the words below. 1. I want to stay indoor this time because I catch a cold. 2. My mom is magnificent to do English. 3. Does your villige have largest apartment? 4. Do they did different thing after lunch? 5. Lotte World\'s rides are too scary that I can\'t open my eyes.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]!

Thanks for doing your homework promptly. Enjoy your night!

Cheers,
Jean~~


Theme: Make a sentence using the words below.
1. I want to stay indoor this time because I catch a cold.
>>  I want to stay indoors this time because I caught a cold.
>> or: I want to stay in an indoor playground because it\'s cold. 

2. My mom is magnificent to do English.
>> My mom is magnificent when she speaks English.

3. Does your villige have largest apartment?
>> Does your village have a large apartment?
>> or: Does your village have the largest apartment that looks like a palace?

4. Do they did different thing after lunch?
>> Did they do different things after lunch?

5. Lotte World\'s rides are too scary that I can\'t open my eyes.
>> correct

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