Homework {08/11}

2021-08-12 · 첨삭 강사 Jean

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Theme: Make a sentence using the words below. 1. Covid-19 is infectious and many people are scared of it. 2. I want to have a shoulder bag. Also, I want to have a backpag. 3. Survival skills are like making fire, swimming, catching small animals like fishes. 4. This symbol is a sign of dangere. 5. You can look through this mirror. Note/Remember the words below. 1. Leather : Using for shoulder bags, backpags.. Etc. 2. White blood cells : Fight for viruses in our body.

강사 첨삭

Here\'s your corrected homework, [이름]. Thanks for sending it. 
Also, be more mindful of spellings.

Cheers,
Jean~~



                                       Theme: Make a sentence using the words below.


1. Covid-19 is infectious and many people are scared of it.
>>OR: COVID-19 is a highly infectious disease and many people are frightened of it.

2. I want to have a shoulder bag. Also, I want to have a backpag.
>> I want to have a shoulder bag. Also, I want to have a backpack. [Please note the spelling of \"backpack\".]
>> OR: I hope to have a handbag. Also, I wish to have a knapsack. \"Handbag \"is a synonym of shoulder bag and \"knapsack\" is a type of backpack. \"Hope, wish, and want\" are also synonymous so you can use any of the three words.]

3. Survival skills are like making fire, swimming, catching small animals like fishes.
>>  Some examples of survival skills are making fires, swimming, catching small animals like fish, and so on.

4. This symbol is a sign of dangere.
>> This symbol is a sign for danger. [[Please note the spelling of \"danger\".]

5. You can look through this mirror.
>> CORRECT

Note/Remember the words below.
1. Leather : Using for shoulder bags, backpags.. Etc.
>> It\'s used in making shoulder bags, backpacks, etc. 

2. White blood cells : Fight for viruses in our body.
>> It fights against viruses in our body. 

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