Homework {08/21}
학생이 쓴 원문
Theme: Make a sentence using the words below.
1. My friend\'s forgiveness is good.
2. I will be loyalty to my country. But I don\'t want to be a solduer.
3. I want to speak odd language in Harry Potter like troll language.
4. I want to have talking animals just like speaking hamster.
5. I want to lie down all day because I will have to do on-line class.
강사 첨삭
Hello again, [이름]!
Thanks for the prompt sending of your homework. Here\'s the corrected composition. Fine job!
Cheers,
Jean~~
1. My friend\'s forgiveness is good.
>> I appreciate my friend\'s forgiveness.
2. I will be loyalty to my country. But I don\'t want to be a solduer.
>> I will be loyal to my country, but I don\'t want to be a soldier.
3. I want to speak odd language in Harry Potter like troll language.
>> I want to speak the odd languages in Harry Potter, such as the troll language.
4. I want to have talking animals just like speaking hamster.
>> I want to have talking animals just like a speaking hamster.
5. I want to lie down all day because I will have to do on-line class.
>> I want to lie down all day because I will have to do online classes.
>> or: I want to lie down all day because I will have online classes.
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