Homework {08/23}
학생이 쓴 원문
Theme: Make a sentence using the words below.
1. I want to do stargazing now. However, I can\'t go out because of COVID-19.
2. I want to look into your mind. Also, I want to talk with you and write something every day.
3. I want to have my constellation shaped key ring but my mom doesn\'t allowed me to buy it.
4. My zodiac sign is cancer or crab.
5. I like gazing at the water and fire.
강사 첨삭
Here\'s your edited homework, [이름]!
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Cheers,
Jean~~
Theme: Make a sentence using the words below.
1. I want to do stargazing now. However, I can\'t go out because of COVID-19.
>> OR: I want to go stargazing now. However, I can\'t go out because of the pandemic.
2. I want to look into your mind. Also, I want to talk with you and write something every day.
>> OR: I want to look into your mind. Also, I want to converse with you and write something every day.
3. I want to have my constellation shaped key ring but my mom doesn\'t allowed me to buy it.
>> I want to have my constellation-shaped keyring/keychain but my mom doesn\'t allow me to buy it.
4. My zodiac sign is Cancer or crab.
>> CORRECT~~
5. I like gazing at the water and fire.
>> OR: I enjoy gazing at the water and fire.
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