Homework {08/25}
학생이 쓴 원문
Theme: Make a sentence using the words below.
1. I will make miniature corals and miniature tropical fish.
2. My dad believes people can exist in Mars but my mom doesn\'t.
3. I am breeding some cats so my friend who has cat far allergy can\'t come to my house to play.
4. My teacher gave me a homework about \"People had been existed in Earth for thousands of years. Why?\" for our science project.
5. I have to breath in the house. But yet, I can\'t breath in the house because the house is in space!
강사 첨삭
Here\'s your corrected homework, [이름]!
Thanks for sending it promptly. Catch you at our next session.
Cheers,
Jean~~
Theme: Make a sentence using the words below.
1. I will make miniature corals and miniature tropical fish.
>> CORRECT~~
2. My dad believes people can exist in Mars but my mom doesn\'t.
>> My dad believes people can live and survive on Mars but my mom doesn\'t.
>> OR: My dad believes living beings exist on Mars but my mom doesn\'t.
3. I am breeding some cats so my friend who has cat far allergy can\'t come to my house to play.
>> I am breeding some cats so my friend who has a cat fur allergy can\'t come to my house to play.
4. My teacher gave me a homework about \"People had been existed in Earth for thousands of years. Why?\" for our science project.
>> My teacher gave me some homework about \"People have been existing on Earth for thousands of years. Why?\" for our science project.
5. I have to breath in the house. But yet, I can\'t breath in the house because the house is in space!
>> I have to take a breath in the house. Yet, I can\'t breathe because the house is in space!
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