homework 08.25

2023-08-25 · 첨삭 강사 Camille

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~ Writing Task: Please answer the question: Are there any jobs you would refuse to do, regardless of the pay? There are many jobs in the world. Among them, there are good jobs, dangerous jobs, and bad(worst) jobs. Among the jobs that I am refuse regardless of the pay is bad job. I think bad jobs means are deceive other people or harm to other people. Actually I don\'t think about this is job. In fact, receive a lot of money is good for me. But, doing the deceive other people jobs will be return to me. So, I will don\'t do these behavior.

강사 첨삭

Good day, [이름]!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Your ideas and opinions are on point. Keep it up! :)
~ T. Camille

~ Writing Task:
Please answer the question:
Are there any jobs you would refuse to do, regardless of the pay?

There are many jobs in the world.

>> CORRECT!
Among them, there are good jobs, dangerous jobs, and bad(worst) jobs.

>> CORRECT!
Among the jobs that I am refuse regardless of the pay is bad job.

>> Among the jobs, that I am going to refuse regardless of the pay is bad job.

I think bad jobs means are deceive other people or harm to other people.

>> I think bad jobs require deceiving other people or harming other people.

Actually I don\'t think about this is job.

>> Actually, I don\'t think it is a job.

In fact, receive a lot of money is good for me.

>> In fact, receiving a lot of money is good for me.

But, doing the deceive other people jobs will be return to me.

>> But, doing these to deceive other people will return back to me.

So, I will don\'t do these behavior.

>> And I don\'t think I deserve this kind of behavior.

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