homework 09.13

2023-09-14 · 첨삭 강사 Camille

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~ Writing Task: Please answer the question: What are the advantages and disadvantages of living alone? Living alone is one of the list I want. Because I have never live alone. So, I think living alone is only have a pros. But, my around people said to me about this, living alone has cons more than pros. Anyway, I think living alone\'s pros is freedom of life. If I living alone, there is no one to point out my life style. If I living with roommate, it will be hard because I have different life style from roommate. So, I think freedom of life is the biggest pros. But, living alone also has a disadvantages. The biggest cons is getting lazy. My friend say, he became lazy because he had to do all housework by himself.

강사 첨삭

Good day, [이름]!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Your ideas and opinions are on point. Keep it up! :)
~ T. Camille

~ Writing Task:
Please answer the question:
What are the advantages and disadvantages of living alone?

Living alone is one of the list I want.
>> Living alone is one of the things I want in my list.
Because I have never live alone.
>> That\'s because I have never tried living alone.
So, I think living alone is only have a pros.
>> So, I think living alone only has pros.
OR >> So, I think living alone only has advantages.
But, my around people said to me about this, living alone has cons more than pros.
>> But, people around me said to me that living alone has cons more than pros.
Anyway, I think living alone\'s pros is freedom of life.
>> Anyway, I think the advantage of living alone is freedom of life.
If I living alone, there is no one to point out my life style.
>> If I live alone, there is no one to point out how I should live my life.
If I living with roommate, it will be hard because I have different life style from roommate.
>> If I live with a roommate, it will be hard because I have a different life style from my roommate.
So, I think freedom of life is the biggest pros.
>> CORRECT!
But, living alone also has a disadvantages.
>> But, living alone also has disadvantages.
The biggest cons is getting lazy.
>> CORRECT!
My friend say, he became lazy because he had to do all housework by himself.
>> CORRECT!

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