homework 09.14
학생이 쓴 원문
~ Writing Task:
Please answer the question:
What is the most interesting anime you have ever watched?
The animation I watched enjoy introducing is \"One Punch Man\".
This anime is a simple story about the main character fighting and off the villains.
But, this anime don\'t have only obvious story.
And it\'s not with a serious and difficult story.
Instead, there were a lot of comedy elements, so I enjoyed watching it.
Next anime is the animation movie \"Up\".
This movie is a little old movie, but I feel it was still memorable.
Because, I think, the story(plot), characters, and music of this movies are so I feel perfect.
So, I think it\'s one of the animated film that enjoyed watching.
강사 첨삭
Good day, [이름]!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Your ideas and opinions are on point. Keep it up! :)
~ T. Camille
~ Writing Task:
Please answer the question:
What is the most interesting anime you have ever watched?
The animation I watched enjoy introducing is \"One Punch Man\".
Please answer the question:
What is the most interesting anime you have ever watched?
The animation I watched enjoy introducing is \"One Punch Man\".
>> The animation I enjoyed watching that I find it really interesting is \"One Punch Man\".
This anime is a simple story about the main character fighting and off the villains.
>> This anime is a simple story about the main character fighting off the villains.
But, this anime don\'t have only obvious story.
>> But, this anime has a simple story.
And it\'s not with a serious and difficult story.
>> CORRECT!
Instead, there were a lot of comedy elements, so I enjoyed watching it.
>> CORRECT!
Next anime is the animation movie \"Up\".
>> CORRECT!
>> CORRECT!
This movie is a little old movie, but I feel it was still memorable.
>> CORRECT!
Because, I think, the story(plot), characters, and music of this movies are so I feel perfect.
>> Because, I think the story (plot), characters, and music of this movie are so perfect for me.
So, I think it\'s one of the animated film that enjoyed watching.
>> CORRECT!
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