homework 09.25
학생이 쓴 원문
~ Writing Task:
Please answer the question:
Are you quick at solving your problems or does it take you quite a time to think of a solution?
I have tend to solve problems quickly.
One of the reason is that my personality is impatient.
When I face the problems, I think it is a stress.
And sometimes this leads to reckless choices.
Reckless choices can be the another problems.
So, theses days I try to changing my personality.
Rather than hasty choices, I try to listen to advice people around me.
강사 첨삭
Good day, [이름]!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Your ideas and opinions are on point. Keep it up! :)
~ T. Camille
~ Writing Task:
Please answer the question:
Are you quick at solving your problems or does it take you quite a time to think of a solution?
I have tend to solve problems quickly.
Please answer the question:
Are you quick at solving your problems or does it take you quite a time to think of a solution?
I have tend to solve problems quickly.
>> I tend to solve problems quickly.
One of the reason is that my personality is impatient.
>> One of the reasons is that I have an impatient personality.
When I face the problems, I think it is a stress.
>> I find it stressful when I face problems.
And sometimes this leads to reckless choices.
>> CORRECT!
Reckless choices can be the another problems.
>> Reckless choices can lead to other problems.
So, theses days I try to changing my personality.
>> So, theses days I try to change my personality.
Rather than hasty choices, I try to listen to advice people around me.
>> Rather than hasty choices, I try to listen to the pieces of advice people give me.
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