Homework {09/27}

2021-09-28 · 첨삭 강사 Jean

학생이 쓴 원문

Theme : Make a sentence using the words below. 1. Flu is a continuous desease. 2. I love assembling blocks together. 3. For instance, My mom is a car engeneer. 4. You have to attach the papers. 5. You have to come over to my place on Thursday!

강사 첨삭

Here\'s your corrected homework, [이름]!
Please pay attention to the spelling, alternative sample sentences, or the other forms of the verb (come over/came over/coming over). See you on Wednesday!

Cheers,
Jean~~


                     Theme : Make a sentence using the words below.


1. Flu is a continuous desease.
>> Flu is a contagious disease. [Please mind the spelling of the word \"disease\".] [\"Contagious\" is different from \"continuous\". \"Contagious\" means transferable disease but \"continuous\" means uninterrupted or never-ending.]
>> sample sentence: The continuous coughing of my friend scared me. 

2. I love assembling blocks together.
>> correct~~
>> sample sentence: I enjoy assembling things, such as toys or even furniture like cabinets, beds, or bookshelves. 

3. For instance, My mom is a car engeneer.
>> For instance, my mom is a car engineer/automotive engineer. [Mind the spelling of the word \"engineer\".]

4. You have to attach the papers.
>> correct~~

5. You have to come over to my place on Thursday!
>> or: My friends came over to my place last Thursday. 
>> or: Are you coming over to my place on Thursday? 

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