Homework {09/28}

2020-09-29 · 첨삭 강사 Jean

학생이 쓴 원문

Theme: Make a sentence using the words. 1. [이름] , can you easily speak english? 2. Have you seen a monkey that speakes english? 3. What do you know about Korea\'s Hanbok? 4. I come from my grandmother\'s house. 5. The most challenging thing about Chuseok is that we eat Songpyeon.

강사 첨삭

Here\'s your edited homework, Clair! 

On a different note, Thanksgiving is more than the festivities, it gives us time to ponder upon what lessons we learnt and how we can spread happiness around, to look back at all the great memories and good people who came into our lives. I appreciate your having classes with me and being such a wonderful student. A blessed Thanksgiving Day to you and your loved ones.

Cheers, 
Jean~~


Theme: Make a sentence using the words.

1. [이름] , can you easily speak english?
>> [이름], can you speak English?
>> Always remember to capitalize the names of languages, such as English, Korean, Filipino, etc. 

2. Have you seen a monkey that speakes english?
>> Have you seen a monkey that speaks English?
>> or: Have you ever seen a monkey that can speak in English?

3. What do you know about Korea\'s Hanbok?
>> correct

4. I come from my grandmother\'s house.
>> or: I just came back from my grandmother\'s house.
>> We usually use the expression \"come from\" when we talk about where we live or grew up. Example: Clair comes from Korea.// He comes from the Middle East.// I come from the Philippines. 

5. The most challenging thing about Chuseok is that we eat Songpyeon.
>> The word \"challenging\" also means \"difficult\" so we can use it this way, \"The most most challenging thing I\'ve ever done during the holidays is cook for 30 people in 4 days. 
>> Your sentence is correct in terms of grammar, but the usage of the word \"challenging\" in this sentence is incorrect because we can\'t really say that eating songpyeon is challenging or difficult unless it\'s like in a contest and you have to eat a lot or perhaps you are allergic to this food but you still have to eat it in Chuseok.^^


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