Homework {09/29}
학생이 쓴 원문
Theme : Make a sentence using the words below.
1. I want to go back to 1700s and 1550s.
2. Way back in 197~80s, my mom was born and also my dad was born.
3. Althogh witches are depicted as vilian in several movies and books, book and movie depicts witches and wizards like a engle.
4. Several teachers like teaching English or Science.
5. You have to bring 2 pieces of paper for making Hanbok.
강사 첨삭
Here\'s your corrected assignment, [이름]!
Please pay attention to the corrections and suggested sentences.
See you again on Friday!
Cheers,
Jean~~
Theme : Make a sentence using the words below.
1. I want to go back to 1700s and 1550s.
>> I want to go back to the 1700s and 1550s.
2. Way back in 197~80s, my mom was born and also my dad was born.
>> Way back in the 1970s~80s, my mom was born, and also my dad.
3. Althogh witches are depicted as vilian in several movies and books, book and movie depicts witches and wizards like a engle.
>> Although witches are depicted as villains in several movies and books, some books and movies depict witches and wizards as angels. [Note the spelling of \"although\", \"villain\", and \"angel\".]
4. Several teachers like teaching English or Science.
>> Several teachers like teaching English or Science.
>> or: Several teachers, like teacher Jean, enjoy teaching English or Science.
5. You have to bring 2 pieces of paper for making Hanbok.
>>correct~~
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