Homework 0924
학생이 쓴 원문
If you could do your childhood all over again, what would you choose to do differently?
If I could do my childhood all over again, I won’t stop to lean piano and taeguen-do.
When I was young, I wanted to lean them with my best friends. Because I was shy girl.
I was so nervous when I went to the place without my friends.
So I stopped to lean them together when my friends quited all.
I regret to choice doing that.
Because I want to be good at doing them now after growing up.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Stella! We all have regrets in life, but you’ve definitely turned out better than you imagined. Thank you for sharing this story about your childhood. Have a great day today! ^^
~T. Jewel
If I could do my childhood all over again, I won’t stop to lean piano and taeguen-do.
>>If I could do my childhood all over again, I wouldn\'t stop learning the piano and taekwondo.
When I was young, I wanted to lean them with my best friends. Because I was shy girl.
When I was young, I wanted to lean them with my best friends. Because I was shy girl.
>>When I was young, I wanted to learn them with my best friends because I was a shy girl.
I was so nervous when I went to the place without my friends.
I was so nervous when I went to the place without my friends.
>>CORRECT
So I stopped to lean them together when my friends quited all.
So I stopped to lean them together when my friends quited all.
>>But I stopped taking these classes when all my friends quit.
I regret to choice doing that.
I regret to choice doing that.
>>I regret choosing to do that.
Because I want to be good at doing them now after growing up.
Because I want to be good at doing them now after growing up.
>>Because I want to be good at them now that I\'ve grown up.
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