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2021-09-06 · 첨삭 강사 Angelica

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I want to go to the future. I\'ve been thinking about traveling in the past, but traveling in the past is just travel. I could\'t change anything because I worried about my change\'s Impact. So I want to travel in the future and see what I am doing. I always have uncertainty about the future of mine. If I could go to the future I will figure out my future work and come back to the present and change the present.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름], 
Thank you very much for sharing your thoughts with me. Like you, I also have uncertainties regarding my future so I would also find it nice to see my future and figure out what changes I can make. 
But since we can\'t do that in reality, let\'s trust in ourselves that the decisions we are making now are good ones ^_^ 
Regards, 
T. Angelica 
I want to go to the future.
>>CORRECT. 
I\'ve been thinking about traveling in the past, but traveling in the past is just travel.
>>I\'ve been thinking about traveling to the past, but traveling to the past would just be travel. 
I could\'t change anything because I worried about my change\'s Impact.
>> I can\'t change anything because I would worry about the impact of any changes I make to my present situation. 
So I want to travel in the future and see what I am doing.
>>So I want to travel to the future and see what I am doing then. 
I always have uncertainty about the future of mine.
>> CORRECT.
OR >> I\'ve always been uncertain about my future. 
If I could go to the future I will figure out my future work and come back to the present and change the present.
>> If I could go to the future, I want to find out about my career so that I can come back to the present and change my present situation. 

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