Homework 1.11
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If someone made a movie of your life, what kind of movie would it be?
: I think my life until now was full of happy and achievement. My family and friends always have made me happy. And since I determined to study hard and try my best to some contest such as English speech contest, debate contest, I was happy when I got satisfactory outcomes. So, I think a movie of my life is kind of growth story!
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I think my life until now was full of happy and achievement.
>> I think my life is full of happiness and achievement.
My family and friends always have made me happy.
>> My family and friends always make me happy.
And since I determined to study hard and try my best to some contest such as English speech contest, debate contest, I was happy when I got satisfactory outcomes.
>> And since I\'m determined to study hard and try my best to win in some contests such as the English contest speech, and debate contest, I always feel happy whenever I get satisfactory outcomes.
So, I think a movie of my life is kind of growth story!
>> So, I think a movie about my life is a kind of growth story!
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