Homework(1/11): Education

2017-01-11 · 첨삭 강사 Jeny

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Friend, Jennifer Cardena Montero. It it correct spell? if no, please tell me correct your full name. Your real name seems to be derived from the Spanish colonial period(16th century, over 300 years), right? but i don't know the mean of your name. = body = Especially, I think education guarantee a good job in Korea. Education is one of the 3 obligations, i.e defense, education and taxation, in the Korean Constitution. if people do not take a appropriate education, they rarely have a chance to get a good job, because most of good jobs need written examination such as Korean, English, mathematics and history, even though the subjects have nothing to do with the job. I think that sports players and engineers also need education outside their specialties. Education is not only getting a good job but also learning how to think and live.

강사 첨삭

Hello Oh!!!
Nice job!!! Well explained heheheheh!!!!
Perseverance is what we need to achieve a goal in life. Studying could be very tough at times but through hard work you can see yourself speaking the language well.
T. Jeny

Friend, Jennifer Cardena Montero.
>>Friend, Jennifer Cardenas Montero.
It it correct spell?
>>Is the spelling correct?
if no, please tell me correct your full name.
>>If no, please tell me your correct full name.
Your real name seems to be derived from the Spanish colonial period(16th century, over 300 years), right? but i don\'t know the mean of your name.
>>correct
= body =
Especially, I think education guarantee a good job in Korea.
>>I think education guarantees a good job in Korea.
Education is one of the 3 obligations, i.e defense, education and taxation, in the Korean Constitution.
>> Education has 3 obligations, i.e defense, education and taxation, in our Korean Constitution.
if people do not take a appropriate education, they rarely have a chance to get a good job, because most of good jobs need written examination such as Korean, English, mathematics and history, even though the subjects have nothing to do with the job.
>>If people don\'t take an appropriate education, they rarely have a chance to get a good job, because most good jobs need written examinations such as Korean, English, mathematics and history, even if those subjects have nothing to do with the job.
I think that sports players and engineers also need education outside their specialties.
>>correct
Education is not only getting a good job but also learning how to think and live.
>>correct

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