Homework(1/13): What do i like about my age now?
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Heheheh, Oh!!!!
Sorry for the mistake!!! Getting old is a privilege because we become wiser...we can understand other people\'s circumstance and that\'s the greatest part of it. We\'ve learned a lot from our experiences which made us a better person.
The good thing about getting old is that we know that doing the right things will lead to a happy life. With no regrets!!!!
T. Jeny
My Teacher, J.C.M.
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Have a happy weekend with your family.
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Today\'s essay title, \"What do like about your age now?\", seems to be wrong.
>>Today\'s essay title, \"What do you like about your age now?\", seems to be wrong. (sorry)
I think this title, \"\"What do i like about your age now?\",is correct, right?
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I can not interpret correctly, so I will write as I think.
>>I can\'t interpret so I will just write what I know.
My age is almost 60.
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In my 40s I was confident in everything.
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However, from the time I was in my 50s, I became to lose the confident.
>> However, from the time I was in my 50s, I begun to lose the confidence.
I thought I could do it both mentally and physically, but I was already treated as an elderly person in society.
>>I thought, I could do both mentally and physically, but I was already treated as an elderly person in the society.
I have been being very eager to work out, play guitar, learn English and so on.
>>I have been very eager to work out, play the guitar, learn English and so on.
The reason I have worked hard was intention to resist this social phenomenon.
>>My intention of working hard was to resist this social phenomenon.
I still think I can be healthy, vivid and can do anything.
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Despite this resistance, society still thinks that 50s is old people.
>>Despite this resistance, society still thinks that 50s is already old.
Just as I thought about the old when I was young.
>>I just thought about the old people when I was young.
I will still resist the prejudice against the age to the end.
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I do not want to get older anymore. My mental age is still bloody 18.
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